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Note from Events Poets UK, organisers of Lennon Poetry Competition

Liverpool Lennon Poet 2010
Paper Poet 
Jaki McCarrick

The Beatles Story are proud to announce that the Liverpool Lennon Poet 2010 was a fantastic success.
Jaki McCarrick was declared as the first ever winner of the Liverpool Lennon Paper Poetry competition by Poet Laureate Carol Ann Duffy.
The glittering ceremony was held on Saturday the 6th of November in the Sir Paul McCartney Auditorium at Lipa (Liverpool Institute of Performing Arts.)
May I personally thank everybody who supported the event and encouraged such an amazing rersponse.
I enclose a copy of Jaki McCarick's deservedly winning poem

Roger Cliffe-Thompson
Competition organizer
eventpoets.co.uk

"In my poem ‘The Selkie of Dorinish,’ I imagine John and Yoko living on the island of Dorinish in Clew Bay, Co. Mayo. Lennon purchased this island in the '60s. I imagine an unusual arrangement for the couple in which John is a shape-changing seal. I rarely enter poetry competitions but I got a strong feeling for this poem after coming across an article on Mayo by Tamasin Day-Lewis in Cara, the Aer Lingus magazine. Like a lot of writers, I am often at my most creative when travelling about." Jaki McCarrick


The Selkie of Dorinish


She has come to love meadowsweet,
and rubs its Germolene smell
into her sallow skin.
In the evenings she gathers wingnuts
for her new artwork
and makes eyes and beady lines
from black bluebell seeds.

Around the cottage are the trees
I planted as seedlings in ‘67:
Spanish oak, a row of limes and elder,
and everywhere the stark green water –
on which, at night,
the mainland throws
its gold and amber elvers.

Sometimes ships will stop for stones
for ballast on the western beach.
Once a sailor saw me
changing from my wet-suit;
then Yoko came and we three sat together
drinking, then watching
the grey Atlantic skies
burst open with light.

There is an island for every day
of the year in Clew.
And here we should have come
after she’d had her New York premonition.

But better late than never.

She keeps the house now
and I the sea around it.

In winter she collects her kindling
in the morning,
wearing lambswool boots
that make no sound.
If out, I’ll cast an eye across and at Croagh Patrick
then watch the mist fall over Inishcuttle,
thick as sealskin on the reeling sea.

Jaki McCarrick 2010

Comments

  1. Gorgeous. I love the lines: "makes eyes and beady lines/
    from black bluebell seeds".
    I've noticed that in your writing; you detail from the earth to seed to plant upwards, so that the scene literally grows up around me as I read.

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  2. Thanks so much Rachel. You are a very close reader. Hope all is well with you.

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